http://poeticmindstate.com/2008/09/23/lust-of-the-forbidden/ Words for The Heart Thoughts from the Soul Sun, 05 Feb 2012 04:54:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://poeticmindstate.com/2008/09/23/lust-of-the-forbidden/#comment-151 Sat, 29 Nov 2008 13:56:58 +0000 http://tjefferson85.wordpress.com/?p=353#comment-151 Wow, i love this. The intensity of your words makes me a bit hot under the collar. Its beautiful.

]]> http://poeticmindstate.com/2008/09/23/lust-of-the-forbidden/#comment-82 Thu, 02 Oct 2008 23:58:33 +0000 http://tjefferson85.wordpress.com/?p=353#comment-82 You have done it again, it’s a wonderful poem. I on wish you could know how much it really hits home. In this commit box I will not say for all to see. But I will say this, a famous artist once said “Let me hold you tight, if only for one night.”

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]]> http://poeticmindstate.com/2008/09/23/lust-of-the-forbidden/#comment-68 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 03:44:32 +0000 http://tjefferson85.wordpress.com/?p=353#comment-68 This is a very powerful erotic poem. I liked it except for the repetition of the word lust in two sentences following each other. I wanted to replace the second occurrence with another word but couldn’t think of one.

]]> http://poeticmindstate.com/2008/09/23/lust-of-the-forbidden/#comment-67 Tue, 23 Sep 2008 19:39:54 +0000 http://tjefferson85.wordpress.com/?p=353#comment-67 NASTY!

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